December 19, 2010

grief's thoughts clattering
afraid of the opposite
deafening stillness


Written for the One Single Impression prompt: Stillness

6 comments:

spiritsoflena said...

I liked "thoughts clattering". Great take on the prompt!

ρομπερτ said...

An entry that could nearly be heard. Good work indeed.

Please have a good new week.

daily athens

Ramesh Sood said...

This is really good.. If you like haikus I would love to invite you on my page as your feedback would be helpful..

Tumblewords: said...

Ah, yes, the stillness can be frightening, too. Nicely posed.

Lisa at Greenbow said...

I hate it when thoughts clatter about. This is a grate haiku.

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Certainly not a silent and still expression of words in emotion...